Advanced Journalism (Wednesday, April 12, 3rd period)

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"Morning," Rita said. On the students' desks, there were copies of the latest few issues of school paper. "Today, we're talking about editing and proofreading others' work. Find something in the last three issues that you find to be poor journalism, for whatever reason."

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Re: Proofread! Annoy Rita! Et Cetera!

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"In the sixteenth issue, there is excessive use of ampersands, slash marks and strike outs, Miss." D'anna finally offered. "Strike outs, which I assume are some sort of mistake on the writer's part, should be removed before publication."

Re: Proofread! Annoy Rita! Et Cetera!

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"I'm not sure what the strikeouts are intended to be in our little version of a newspaper," Rita sighed. "I suppose it's intended to be some kind of flirtatious, cute thing, but I don't understand it. Well done, though."

Re: Proofread! Annoy Rita! Et Cetera!

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"Thank you, Miss." D'anna grinned and turned her attention to her giant-jumbo-super-huge-omg coffee.