http://brambless.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fandomhigh2005-10-21 07:44 pm
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Friday Ethics Class #2, 8-10am

Tara looks excited, as students trickle in, bouncing slightly on the balls of her feet.

"Okay, we've got a lot to get through today. Two announcements to start:

First, Teacher's Assistants have been chosen. I have a carrot - Major K! - and a stick - Angelus. If you're having trouble grasping a concept, talk to Major K!. He'll guide you through the thinking. If you think you've got a hold on it, talk to Angelus. He'll challenge your thinking, give you the opportunity to clarify your position.

Second, and related to the latter - this class is not an easy A. At some point in this course you will find yourself challenged and confronted. For many of you, that will be today. If you walk out of this classroom before class is over, and without checking it with me, I may be understandably upset. However, I recognise that if you get angry or upset, you may need some time alone, or away from the group. To that end, I present to you the Emo Closet Time Out Room." She walks to the back of the classroom and opens the door to what previously was a supply cabinet. Inside is what looks very much like a white padded room. "This room is soundproofed. You can cry, scream and punch things all you want, and I will not penalise you for leaving the class or the discussion. Major K! or I will come to check on anyone who goes to the Emo Closet Time Out Room, in case you need help or support. Feel free to tell us to leave you alone.

Now, we've got our first debate to hear, a discussion topic to... um, discuss, and your first out of class assignment. Which you are going to kill, or at least seriously maim, me for giving you.

Re: Debate - OOC

[identity profile] valentine-tart.livejournal.com 2005-10-28 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
This unworthy one will do what she can to round up the participants, My Lady. If it can be done, it shall be. *eyes lowered*

If not, My Lady is most gracious to her unworthy students to consider extending the debate.

*hugs*
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Re: Debate - OOC

[personal profile] sensethevisions 2005-10-28 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Bright One and her mun thank you for the extension as she is insane at the moment.

Re: Debate - OOC

[identity profile] valentine-tart.livejournal.com 2005-10-28 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
OK, that's about 1/10th. I'd go for entire paragraphs. Also, look suspiciously at long footnotes. I used to move big discussions into them.

Try trimming down intro and conclusion paragraphs and see if you put more than you needed to in the overall intro.

Look at example paragraphs and see if the language can be trimmed.

You can do this. I know it. *believes in you*

FH problems are minor. Real life WAY comes first.

Re: Debate - OOC

[identity profile] auroryborealis.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Ping! Posted and slightly more Roryfied.

Sorry it took so long. PW stuff is killing me, not to mention Becky's date with Geoff and RL stuff.

Re: Debate - OOC

[identity profile] valentine-tart.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, totally no worries! I was supposed to get you the notes days ago!

You rock mightily. :)