Journalism 101/201 (Wednesday, April 12 - 5th period)

[imanaturalblond.livejournal.com]

"Hello, boys and girls," Rita said. "Today, we look at structure. Please take a look at the paper, and read through the articles. There are a few instances of not only poor grammar, but bad journalistic structure. Given that we're on a word count when we write for a newspaper, we need to conserve space and say things with the utmost clarity and fewest words. So take a look at the paper. Is this accomplished?"

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Re: Read the paper and so on!

[peter--parker.livejournal.com]

Well there was a thought. Maybe if DUCKLINGS ever met again, it could focus on his and Rory's feelings of journalistic inadequacy...

"It is still a learning experience, though, ma'am. If we can see our faults now, hopefully we can improve upon them. Next week maybe I'll have some actual content and be a bit more concise."