Journalism 101/201 (Wednesday, April 12 - 5th period)

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"Hello, boys and girls," Rita said. "Today, we look at structure. Please take a look at the paper, and read through the articles. There are a few instances of not only poor grammar, but bad journalistic structure. Given that we're on a word count when we write for a newspaper, we need to conserve space and say things with the utmost clarity and fewest words. So take a look at the paper. Is this accomplished?"

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Re: Read the paper and so on!

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"It's a show, where a bunch of twenty-somethings all crash in one house and attention-whore at the camera because they're not the most important at every second of the day," she says. "I'm thinking about applying as soon as I'm old enough."

Re: Read the paper and so on!

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"I think the majority of the school population would fit in well there," Rita smirked.