fandomhigh | Creative Writing: Poetry, Lesson Seven

Wednesday, December 14, 7:00PM FST

Just a quick reminder to everyone that your sestinas will be read aloud in class next week, so if you're having trouble writing please make time to come see me. Also, if you owe make-up work, I need it turned in to me by Thursday, December 15 -- which is tomorrow, by the way.

Today we're going to talk about a form of poetry called blank verse, and pick up our discussion of your assigned reading. I'll also be offering an extra credit exercise for those of you interested.

[Lecture] Blank verse is comprised of unrhymed lines all in the same meter, usually iambic pentameter. It was developed in Italy and became widely used during the Renaissance because it resembled classical, unrhymed poetry. Marlowe's "mighty line," which demonstrated blank verse's range and flexibility, made blank verse the standard for many early English writers, including both Shakespeare and Milton, and was embraced by more modern poets such as Yeats, Pound, Frost, and Stevens. While it may not be as common as open form, it retains an important role in the world of poetry.

Blank verse can be composed in any meter and with any amount of feet per line (any line length), though the iamb is generally the predominant foot. The other three standard feet and their variations can be employed in a blank verse poem. It is difficult--almost impossible--to write a blank verse poem consisting of all iambs, and other types of feet get used more often than one may think.

Blank verse can be written with any combination of feet. The name of the dominant foot coupled with the number of feet in the line, provide the name of a poem's meter. For example, the dominant foot in Robert Frost's "Mending Wall" is the iamb, and there are five feet per line. Thus, the poem is written in iambic pentameter. Notice, however, that not each foot is an iamb, but Frost mixes up the feet, as in the first few lines of the poem.

Something there is that doesn't love a wall,
That sends the frozen-ground-swell under it,
And spills the upper boulders in the sun

[Discussion] Alexander Pope's The Dunciad is an example of satirical poetry. Choose one of the four sections and answer the following questions: What is Pope satirizing? What do you think he was trying to accomplish through this satire?

[Extra Credit] Write a short poem in blank verse satirizing something about Fandom High. (Extra credit can be applied to make-up work for missed classes if you like.)

The following students have two or more unexcused absences. If you have not yet seen me about make-up work for the classes missed, please do so.

scissors___: two absences, have discussed make-up work

death_n_binky two absences, have discussed make-up work

rory__gilmore two absences

Make-up work needs to be handed in to me no later than Thursday, December 15 (~~yes OMG tomorrow~~).

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"We have to read them out loud?" Paige asks looking, very worried about this, well that gives her a week to completely redo the sestina, so Sawyer never knows she's writing poetry about him and to make it less...sucky.

*starts to write a poem in blank verse for the make-up work*

"I believe Collins wrote in blank verse too, sir? Like in his 'ode to evening', and odes to other random things?"

((Are we supposed to really write the sestinas (like the over-active Kiki did) or will *reads sestina out loud* suffice?))

((Better question yet- (yay i'm spamming your inbox :)) Can Ed hand in his make-up work here in advance? 'Cause i'll be off tomorrow the entire day :\ ))

"Pope is definitely satirizing his contemporaries, particularly political figures and fellow members of the literary field. He seems to particularly hate writers-for-hire, and booksellers that enable them. I mean, he has them running through...er, human waste, chasing a fake poet, one who was a plagerist, so he certainly has no love for people who fancy themselves literary greats who really are hacks."

[That's just my inner English minor OCD whore coming out to play! ;-) ]

"When have I ever given you a writing assignment that hasn't been read aloud, Paige?" Geoff grins. "You'll be fine."

You don't have to actually write one -- just nick one from somewhere if you like. You'll get extra credit on the assignment if you do write one, but it isn't required. :)

My inbox has been feeling a little empty lately anyway. *grin* Yes, go right ahead and turn in your make-up work today. Post it in the "Questions" thread if you would, please. :)

"Very good, Edward, yes. Collins' "Ode to Evening" is a good example of how a mixture of meters can be employed within the same poem as well, and still be considered blank verse as opposed to free verse, which doesn't employ the same regularity of meter. For example, Collins employs pairs of lines written in the same meter, but varies the meter throughout the poem."

She frowns, that was Sawyer's hard man image going to pot then "erm yeah thanks sir." she shes mentally trying to work out another 6 words.

Edward hands in his make-up work in advance. Which consists, amongst other things, about a pretty poem in blank verse about coffee and how hard it is to not drop your shampoo in the shower when you got no hands. He has also made the assignments he missed, and read the book of the Duchess (Aww poor black knight. Poor Blanche. Poor John of Gaunt. Poor puppydog that leads the narrator through the forest. Ed has been crying a lot over this. And will never play chess again. Because you just never know.)

"Well, i guess Pope was not very happy because he had to write for money, being a catholic and all, and still managed to make some quite decent works. The hacks were just writing as many words as possible ~~like that dickens guy~~ to get rich."

"I know you said this before, but I can't find it in my notes. How do you tell what the meter in a poem is again?"

Lee launches into a long analysis of what he personally thinks Pope is satirizing in his poem -- and he's completely missing the point.

Bitterly, Lee writes this and submits it.

The dark knight’s lips were pressed against her lover’s brow
She stared in abject horror and her breath caught in her throat
Her lover sighed and told her tales that forced her heart to break
He would be her lover no more, nor the dark knight her friend.

*DEATH walks in, a full day late, and stares around at the empty classroom. He seems mildly confused and, after a moment, consults with a clock he keeps in his robes for just such an occassion.*

*dies*

"Thank you, Edward. Your unexcused absence is now stricken from the books."

[ooc: Poor Edward. I'll try and assign happier reading assignments next term. *grin*]

Chaucer explains to Angela about poetic meter (http://www.livejournal.com/community/fandomhigh/341491.html#cutid1).

[ooc: I thought it would be easiest to link you to the lecture. :)]

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